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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v2

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Yu Han Lee

Content: The passage suggests that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Apr 7, 2026