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Situational Writing: Letter to the Principal — v2

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Yu Han Lee

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Maricel Santos	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Mar 20, 2026