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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v2

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Yu Han Lee

Content: To begin with, technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Joanna Reyes	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Jun 11, 2026