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Descriptive Essay: Grandmother's Kitchen — v3

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Yu Han Lee

Content: It cannot be denied that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Mar 31, 2026