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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v2

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Jing Wen Lim

Content: There is a common assumption that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Aug 6, 2024