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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v1

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Jing Wen Lim

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kristine Bautista	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Nov 20, 2025