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Summary Writing: Urban Farming Passage — v1

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Sep 27, 2024