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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v1

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Jing Wen Lim

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Shawn Lim	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Nov 23, 2024