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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v1

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Jing Wen Lim

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kenji Ong	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Feb 3, 2026