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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v2

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Jing Wen Lim

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Joanna Reyes	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	Dec 3, 2025