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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Ming En Toh

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kristine Bautista	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Aug 30, 2025