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Discursive Essay: Is Homework Necessary? — v1

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Kenji Ong	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Sep 14, 2024