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Comprehension: Why We Procrastinate — v1

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Ming En Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Jan 5, 2026