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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v3

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Ming En Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Feb 1, 2025