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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v2

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Ming En Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Kenji Ong	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jan 30, 2025