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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Ming En Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kristine Bautista	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	GrammarSentence Structure	Feb 2, 2025