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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: Many people believe that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Shawn Lim	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / ContentOrganisation / Structure	Apr 24, 2026