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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v1

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: To begin with, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided clear boundaries are set at home and in school. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kristine Bautista	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jun 4, 2025