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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Maricel Santos	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jun 17, 2026