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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Mar 29, 2026