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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v3

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: It cannot be denied that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jun 19, 2026