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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: Many people believe that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jun 7, 2026