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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

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Jing Wen Toh
Assignment
Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles
Version
v1
Submitted
Apr 17, 2026
Homework Due
Apr 16, 2026

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Content
There is a common assumption that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kenji OngMuch improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.PunctuationApr 23, 2026