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Situational Writing: Speech for Racial Harmony Day — v1

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Jing Wen Toh

Content: There is a common assumption that students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jun 25, 2026