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Argumentative Essay: Money Is the Best Motivator — v2

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Shreya Sharma

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Jun 14, 2026