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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v1

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Shreya Sharma

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Kristine Bautista	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	May 8, 2026