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Situational Writing: Letter to the Principal — v1

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Shreya Sharma

Content: It cannot be denied that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Shawn Lim	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Jun 15, 2026