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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v2

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Content: There is a common assumption that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Joanna Reyes	Careful with subject-verb agreement — 'the group of students were' should be 'was'. Also proofread for spelling; I marked four slips in the margin.	Grammar	Aug 22, 2024