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Editing Exercise: Commonly Confused Words — v1

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Ming En Ong

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Ming En Ong
Assignment
Editing Exercise: Commonly Confused Words
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v1
Submitted
Jan 8, 2025
Homework Due
Jan 9, 2025

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The passage suggests that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela CruzYour argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.GrammarSentence StructureJan 17, 2025