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Argumentative Essay: Exams Measure Nothing — v2

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Content: There is a common assumption that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Maricel Santos	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Oct 27, 2024