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Argumentative Essay: Exams Measure Nothing — v1

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Ming En Ong

Content: To begin with, technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Joanna Reyes	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Oct 12, 2024