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Situational Writing: Letter to the Principal — v2

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Ming En Ong

Content: There is a common assumption that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Paolo dela Cruz	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	Dec 5, 2024