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Narrative Essay: The Wrong Bus — v2

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Ming En Ong

Content: Many people believe that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Joanna Reyes	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	Aug 16, 2024