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Discursive Essay: Is Homework Necessary? — v1

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Content: The passage suggests that my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Kristine Bautista	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Dec 14, 2024