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Summary Writing: Urban Farming Passage — v1

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Ming En Ong

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Aug 28, 2025