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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v1

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Ming En Ong
Assignment
Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later?
Version
v1
Submitted
Feb 15, 2026
Homework Due
Feb 17, 2026

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Content
The scene unfolds slowly: the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Joanna ReyesGood effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.PunctuationFeb 25, 2026