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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v1

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Ming En Ong

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. In conclusion, a balanced approach serves us best.
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Joanna Reyes	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	Punctuation	Feb 25, 2026