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Argumentative Essay: Social Media Does More Harm Than Good — v1

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Ming En Ong

Content: Many people believe that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Maricel Santos	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jan 18, 2026