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Discursive Essay: The Cost of Convenience — v1

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Rohan Rajendran

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	Strong opening and a clear stand. Your rebuttal paragraph, though, asserts rather than argues — add one concrete example and this becomes an upper-band script.	Argument / Content	May 21, 2026