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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v1

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Wei Jie Koh

Content: To begin with, the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kristine Bautista	Your argument is developing well, but watch your tense consistency — you drift between past and present in paragraphs two and three. Rework those and resubmit.	Grammar	Jun 26, 2026