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Descriptive Essay: The MRT at Rush Hour — v1

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: In today's world, it is increasingly clear that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Kenji Ong	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Jun 8, 2025