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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v3

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Nurul Rahman

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jun 24, 2026