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Vocabulary Drill: Connectors & Transitions — v1

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Nurul Rahman

Content: The passage suggests that the writer's childhood memories anchor the passage and give the argument its emotional weight. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Shawn Lim	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Jun 19, 2026