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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v1

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Nurul Rahman

Content: To begin with, the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. That, I believe, is the heart of the matter.
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Kenji Ong	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Jun 13, 2026