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Argumentative Essay: Should School Start Later? — v3

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Meera Rajendran

Content: There is a common assumption that technology has quietly rewritten the rules of friendship, study, and family life. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Shawn Lim	Good effort on structure. However, several sentences run on without punctuation, which makes your strongest points hard to follow. Break them up and vary your openings.	PunctuationSentence Structure	Mar 6, 2025