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Comprehension: Rise of E-Sports — v1

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Jun Kai Sim

Content: The passage suggests that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	PunctuationSpelling	Jan 11, 2025