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Editing Exercise: Prepositions & Articles — v1

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Meera Rajendran

Content: When I first considered the question, I felt that small daily habits matter more than dramatic gestures, a point the writer returns to in the final paragraph. The final image lingers long after the noise fades.
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Paolo dela Cruz	Your description leans on sight alone. Bring in sound and smell as we practised in class, and cut the narrative detour in paragraph three.	Argument / Content	Nov 11, 2024