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Situational Writing: Report to the School Office — v3

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Meera Rajendran

Content: To begin with, students face mounting pressure to perform, and this shapes how they spend every hour after school. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Kenji Ong	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Nov 22, 2024