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Descriptive Essay: A Hawker Centre at Noon — v1

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Vanessa Oliveiro

Content: There is a common assumption that the aroma of chicken rice drifts across the crowded tables while the queue snakes past the drinks stall. With better planning, the outcome could have been different.
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Maricel Santos	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / Structure	Jun 23, 2026