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Situational Writing: Email to a Community Club — v1

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Vanessa Oliveiro

Content: The scene unfolds slowly: my initial stand softened once I weighed the counter-arguments raised in class. Ultimately, the responsibility lies with each of us.
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Paolo dela Cruz	The content is on-topic but your paragraphs need clearer topic sentences. Each paragraph should carry one idea; yours often carry two or three.	Organisation / StructureArgument / Content	May 1, 2026