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Comprehension: Growing Up in Tiong Bahru — v1

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Vanessa Oliveiro

Content: Many people believe that careful planning before writing made the biggest difference to my structure this time. This is why I stand firmly by my view.
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Shawn Lim	Much improved from your last version. Remaining issues are minor — two comma splices and one misspelt 'occurred'. Fix these and this is done.	Punctuation	Apr 14, 2026